Due Sep 14

Deepening Analysis

Last time for HW you wrote two paragraphs discussing one of three educational videos. This time I'd like you to create a 2-¶ sequence where the second ¶ bounces in some way off the first one. I'm especially interested in seeing one of the "Analytic" rather than one of the "Narrative" transitions from our list of ¶ transitions.

To make the discussion more lively, please choose a video to write on from any of the thousands (millions?) of educational pieces on YouTube.

Several guidelines:

• For clarity of formatting, please put two returns between the ¶s.
• For clarity of understanding, try to phrase the opening sentence of your new ¶ so as to signal to the reader how it improves on, or complicates, or perhaps even undercuts the point you made in your earlier analysis.
• Do include a fresh link to the video you're discussing.
• Finally, beneath your video link, name the paragraph transition you see between your ¶s.